英语六级《学生还贷问题》

英语六级范文《学生还贷问题》

现今，在高校有许多大学生通过助学贷款完成自己的学业，但是有些学生毕业后没有能力或拒绝按时还贷。对于学生还贷一事，你怎么看?我们来看看六级考生怎么说。

On Paying back Student Loans

Nowadays, college students who need financial aid can apply for student loans provided by state-owned commercial banks, which can help them pay their tuition fees and cover their necessary daily expense. Take Beijing Normal University as an example, the last year has witnessed that 245 college students applied for student loans.

However，to our disappointment, there is an increasing rate of students who have failed to refund the loans in time. Some students are really unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemploy-ment or some other reasons. But there are a number of students refu-sing to pay it back even though they can.

As for me，college students should increase their awareness of credit. Anyone in debt should try his best to repay the loans in due time. If they are really in great difficulty，it is proper to inform the bank as soon as pos-sible and apply for a delayed repayment. Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.

写作点评：

毫无疑问，第一段的大写字母和数据能迅速吸引阅卷老师的 眼球。同时使用了 witness, take…as an example等好词和词组，无 疑增加了亮点。

第一段:直接提出该段中心“现今,在髙校有许多大学生通过 助学贷

款完成自己的'学业' 而后，“一句话”举出例 子，更加形象地说明大学生申请助学贷款。

第二段:直接展现该段主题句“但是有些学生毕业后没有能力 或拒绝按时还贷”。紧接着进行细节化的说明，用 unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemployment 和 refusing to pay it back even though they can来说明。

第三段:直接展现该段中心“我认为贷款的学生应如何对待还 贷问题”。认为,应该尽力偿还贷款，如果实在有困 难，可以申请延期还贷。最后以倒装句Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.结尾。

点亮文章的词语与句子： 1. financial aid 财政帮助 2.apply for 申请

3.refund the loans 偿还贷款 4.awareness of credit 诚信的意识

5.Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.(倒装句，常用的一种亮点句型。)