初中英语作文题目及范文解读
1．同学们，来到新学校，你认识你的新同学了吗？假如你是Andy，请写一篇文章介绍自己．写作要点：你的名字，年龄，来自哪里；介绍你的家庭成员；还可以说说你最喜欢的运动和音乐．
写作要求：拼写正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥，书写工整，60个词左右． 【分析】高分句型一：
There are four people in my family．我家有四口人．句子考查there be结构，be动词遵循就近原则，people是复数形式，be动词使用are． 高分句型二：
My favourite music is\"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan \"and my favourite sport is playing football．我最喜欢的音乐是《二泉映月》，我最喜欢的运动是踢足球．句子中playing用动名词形式作表语．
【解答】My name is Andy．I am 13 years old．I am from Dongguan．There are four people in my family．【高分句型一】（我的基本信息）They are my father，my mother，my sister and I．（家庭成员）My favourite music is\"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan \"and my favourite sport is playing football．【高分句型二】（爱好）
【点评】本题是小作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
2．下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，每个调查项目之后有几个选项，请将符合自己实际情况的选项打\"⋅\"（除前两个项目外，其他均可多选）．然后，根据你的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈你的想法．
课文课外阅读问卷调查表
调查项目 （1）阅读兴趣 （2）阅读时间
选项
A．喜欢 B．有点喜欢 C．不喜欢 A．每天阅读 B．有时阅读 C．很少阅读
D．完全不读
（3）阅读内容
A．小说 B．散文 C．诗歌
D．其他
（4）阅读目的
A．提高语文水平 B．增加知识 C．休闲娱乐
D．其他
（5）阅读书籍 （6）影响阅读的因素 注意：
A．自己选择 B．父母购买 C．教师指定
D．其他
A．学习压力太大 B．教师没有要求 C．没有书籍可
读 D．其他
①无须写标题；
②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目，以及关于课外阅读的想法； ③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名； ④词数为80左右．
参考词汇：fiction小说；essay散文．
【分析】这是一份给材料作文．首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，然后根据自己的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈自己的想法．要用第一人称，一般现在时态．文中可加however、so等连词，可使文章更通顺． 【解答】参考范文1
I like reading very much．I always do some reading in my free time．My favorite books are fictions．On weekends，I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like．My parents buy some books for me as gifts．I think reading is very interesting and helpful．It not only makes me relaxed but also improves my Chinese，especially my writing．However，as students of Grade Nine，we are under great pressure of study，and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class．So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read．I believe the more we read，the better we'll do in exams． 短文写作参考范文2
I like reading a little．Sometimes I do some reading just for fun．I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting．At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons，and I also borrow some from my friends．Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading．But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read，such as fictions，essays and some science books．I hope she can choose some more interesting books for us．Maybe that will make me like reading．As we all know，interest is the best teacher．
【点评】书面表达要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容．在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题．审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等．
3．请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary．
Time In the morning In class After school In the evening
Good habits Get up early Ask some questions Always exercise Help her parents with housework
Bad habits Eat junk food for breakfast Quarrel（争吵） with her classmates sometimes Go home late Watch TV or play computer games for more than an hour
要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确． 2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示． 3、词数不少于60个英语单词． 4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数．
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全．写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚．根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺．为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词和时间状语等． 【解答】Dear Mary，
I'm very glad to introduce my classmate Zhang Ying to you．She is a 14﹣year﹣old girl．She has a lot of good habits．She gets up early every morning．In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions．After school she always exercises （for a long time）．After supper she helps her parents with housework．（She is really a good girl．）But she has some bad habits，too．She often eats junk food for breakfast．Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class．She doesn't go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening．（This makes her parents unhappy．）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl．Do you think so？ Yours
Huang Deshun
【点评】本文要求把张颖介绍给别人，这种题材常用的句子有很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等．根据提示可知，本文中还要注意时间状语的使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明．
4．
To：Li Ming From：John Dear Li Ming，
We will have a Chinese cultural festival in our school next week. I need to give a report about a Chinese special day. Can you help me with some information？ For example， when is the day？ Why and how do Chinese people celebrate it？ Is there any traditional food？ How can I make it？ Looking forward to your reply. John
To：John From：Li Ming Dear John，
. Yours， Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
Now I'll introduce our traditional festival ﹣ Mid﹣Autumn Festival to you， which falls in September or October.现在我将向你介绍我们的传统节日﹣﹣中秋节，它是在九月或十月。
关系词which 引导非限制性定语从句。 【高分句型二】
What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes.最让我们印象深刻的是，所有的家庭成员都喜欢晚上呆在外面享受月亮，这时他们在吃月饼。
What 引导主语从句。 that引导宾语从句。 as 引导时间状语从句。 【解答】To：John From：Li Ming Dear John，
Now I'll introduce our traditional festival﹣﹣Mid﹣Autumn Festival to you， which falls in September or October.【高分句型一】（时间）We celebrate the Mid﹣Autumn Festival to celebrate family reunion.（庆祝原因）On that day we usually have a big dinner and the typical food﹣moon cakes together. Mooncakes are our traditional food.They are made of flour， sugar and some nuts.（传统食物及做法）There are many kinds of moon cakes， such as meat， nuts or something else.What impresses us most is that all the family members like to stay outside in the evening to enjoy the moon as they are eating moon cakes.【高分句型二】 During this time， we may look back on the past and look forward to the future.（介绍有关中秋节的习俗） Yours， Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．你校校报对全校800名学生喜欢阅读的图书类型做了一次调查，假如你是校报的小记者王丹，请根据邮件及表格提示，给校报的负责入John写一封回信。 注意：词数：80﹣100（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数） Dear Wang Dan，
We made a survey among 800 students in our school to find out what kind of books they like best.Now we need to write an article for the school newspaper about the findings.What are the results of the survey？What kind of books do they prefer（ 更喜欢）？Why？Please reply as soon as possible. Yours，
John
Kinds of books Cartoons Stories Science books
Dear John，
In the survey，________.
Yours， Wang Dan
【分析】【高分句型一】
They don't have to think too much when they watch them.他们看的时候不需要想太多。 when引导时间状语从句。 【高分句型二】
26% of the students like reading science books.26%的学生喜欢阅读科学书籍。 like doing sth喜欢做某事。 【解答】Dear John，
In the survey，They chose their favorite ones from cartoons，stories and science books.From the chart，the results can be shown.（点题）
53% of the students like to read cartoons best because they think cartoons are easy to understand.They don't have to think too much when they watch them. 【高分句型一】31% of the students say that stories are their favorites.Because there are many interesting experiences in these stories.26% of the students like reading science books. 【高分句型二】These books will help them open up an unknown world.（调查结果及原因）
Yours， Wang Dan 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
Students 53% 31% 26%
Reasons（why） interesting… easy to read
…
6．假如你是李平，你的朋友John在给你的e﹣mail中提到不久将来中国旅行，请根据John的书信内容回复．次数：80个左右． From ：John Hi Li Ping，
Long time no see!It has been ten years since I came to China last time．I remember that you lived in Building 10．Changhe Avenue with a small river in front in Lantian City．Do you still live there？We went for trips together by bus or by bike at that time．Taxi was very expensive．Shopping in the stores was crowded．You've mentioned great changes in your letter．Can you tell me the changes around？Hope to hear from you soon． All the best John
To John，
Subject：Changes in Lantian City，China Hi John，
Very glad to know that you are coming to China soon．As you can see，there have bee many changes in the past ten years in Lantian City in China． 【分析】高分句型一：
During the recent years，a large number of comfortable buildings have been built，which attracted more people to live here．
近年来，大量的舒适楼房已经建成，吸引了更多的人住在这里．have been built已经建成，现在完成时的被动语态，which attracted more people to live here．吸引了更多的人住在这里．本句使用了非限制性定语从句， 高分句型二：
It is convenient to reach here by subway，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi． 乘地铁到这里很方便，比公共汽车快，比出租车便宜．It is +adj +to do sth ，it作形式主语，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi．比公共汽车快，比出租车便宜，本句使用了非限制性定语从句， 【解答】Hi John，
Very glad to know that you are coming to China soon．As you can see，there have been many changes in the past ten years in Lantian City in China．开篇点题）
During the recent years，a large number of comfortable buildings have been built，which attracted more people to live here． 【高分句型一】There are more tress and flowers than before．The environment is becoming better and better．（城市的变化）My family moved into an apartment in Lanhe Garden，located in Lanhe Avenue．（搬家后的住址） It is convenient to reach here by subway，which is faster than bus and less expensive than taxi． 【高分句型二】交通更方便）Nowadays，more and more people prefer shopping online，which made shopping in stores less popular．Therefore，if you want to go shopping，don't worry about the crowds．（越来越多的人喜欢网上购物，不担心拥挤的人群） I'm looking forward to meeting you soon． Yours， Li Ping
【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
7．请以\"My Best Friend and I\"为题写一篇短文，说说你们的外貌，性格，爱好等，80词左右。
. 【分析】【高分句型一】
We both like reading.我们都喜欢读书 like doing sth表示喜欢做某事。 【高分句型二】
I want to be a doctor.我想成为一名医生。 句子中want to do sth表示想做某事。
【解答】Linda is my best friend. We are the same in some ways， but we are different in some ways. （点题）We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller than me. And she is more serious than me. I am more outing and funnier than her.We both like reading. 【高分句型一】She likes talk shows， but I like game shows.She wants to be a writer. I want to be a doctor.【高分句型二】（从各个方面介绍我们俩）
We often help each other and we are good friends.（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．某网站论坛在为\"我和我的家乡\"征稿。假如你是Helen，来自一个中国的小镇。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你所居住的小镇，以吸引更多的外国游客前来体验游玩。
要求：1.80﹣100词，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.至少使用两个含有比较级或最高级的句子。（参考词供你选用：be famous for，watch the scenery，the beautiful mountain，the clean water，the fresh air，outdoor activities，eat natural food in a farmer's house，stay in a farmer 's house，be cheap，quiet life，…） My town
风景（scenery） 优美（山水等） 空气清新
户外活动（垂钓、登山）
体验农家生活（吃农家饭、住农家院等）
. 【分析】【高分句型一】
All in all，it's a good place to visit.总而言之，这是一个旅游的好地方。 a good place to do sth做某事的好地方。 【高分句型二】
Welcome to my town.欢迎来到我的城市。 Welcome to…欢迎到……
【解答】Hi，everyone!I'm Wang Tao，from a small town.My town is famous for its beautiful scenery.It has a river with the clearest water.It also has the loveliest mountain.（风景）You can fish in the river or climb the mountain.You can enjoy the freshest air here.（空气和户外活动）You can eat farm food，stay at a farmer's house and enjoy the happiness and quiet life of the countryside.（体验农家生活）What's more，you'll find everything here much cheaper. （购物）All in all，it's a good place to visit.【高分句型一】Welcome to my town.【高分句型二】（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．假如你是王敏，即将毕业于Hangzhou No.1 Middle School．请你写一封信回复加拿大国际高中Toronto International School （TIS）的招生广告．信中包含你想就读的原因，突出你的优势和特色．
WANTED
Active，creative，communicative and meaningful subjects are waiting for you! We have native English teachers with rich teaching experience for over 200． ﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣ Open﹣﹣Minded Learning Area﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣﹣
Of course，your interest，confidence，imaginations，special（特长）and your kindness are
greatly needed and available! Write to Professor Nail right now!!
词数：80个左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：study abroad，be interested in，get an opportunity，learn a lot about，Although…，make an effort to … Dear Professor Nail， ______
I am looking forward to your kind reply． Yours sincerely， Wang Min
【分析】【高分句型一】
I am interested in Chinese，English and music as well．我对汉语、英语和音乐也感兴趣． be interested in对…感兴趣． 【高分句型二】
Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me．虽然我现在不是最好的，我将尽一切努力成为一名优等生，我相信你会为我感到骄傲． although不能和but同时出现． make an effort to do sth努力做某事． I believe+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear Professor Nail，
I am Wang Min from Hangzhou No.1 Middle School．I wish to get an opportunity to study at TIS．（点题）
Like many other boys，I enjoy doing sports．Maths and science are my favourite subjects．I am interested in Chinese，English and music as well． 【高分句型一】（爱好和特长）I have won several prizes in various competitions，including a second prize in an international maths competition．（取得的成就）
I have studied the programme for one month and I learnt a lot about American culture and made many friends there．So TIS is my first choice to study abroad．（准备工作）
Although I am not the best now，I will make every effort to become a top student and I believe you will be proud of me．（自信）【高分句型二】 I am looking forward to your kind reply．（期待） Yours sincerely， Wang Min
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
10．仔细观察图中乘客在公交车上的举止，参考所提供的短语写一篇短文．
talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…
提示：
1．短文内容包括对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述和你的建议四条． 2．词数80个左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数． 3．文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息．
Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．
【分析】高分句型一
I think everyone should obey the bus regulations．我认为每个人都应该遵守公车管理规定．I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句． 高分句型二
it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽车上是不允许抽烟的．it is not allowed to do sth．不允许做某事．
【解答】Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped a lot of litter．【要点一，对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述】I think everyone should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】，it is not allowed to smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要点二，建议】
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
11．寒假即将到来，为了度过一个有意义的寒假，学校英语社团发出相关倡议．请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文．
内容要点：①do exercise； ②have a healthy diet： ③spend less time going online： ④go to bed early：⑤…
要求：l．内容包含以上所有要点，并可适当增加； 2．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等详细信息： 3．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数． Dear students．
The winter holiday is coming soon． To have a meaningful holiday， what should we middle school students do？
First of all， ____________________________．
School English Club
【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm going to eat more fruits and vegetables， because they are good for my health． 我要多吃水果和蔬菜，因为它们对我的健康有好处．because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I believe I will spend a meaningful winter holiday． 我相信我将度过一个有意义的寒假．I believe+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear students，
The winter holiday is coming soon． To have a meaningful holiday， what should we middle school students do？（点题）
First of all， I'm going to do exercise more． Many of my friends like playing basketball so we are going to make a basketball team and play basketball every afternoon． I think it's good exercise．（运动）I plan to have a healthy diet． I'm going to eat more fruits and vegetables， because they are good for my health．【高分句型一】（健康饮食）I am going to spend less
time going online． （上网时间变少）I'm going to bed early and get up early every day．（早睡早起）I am also going to read more meaningful books， because I want to know more knowledge．（多读书）
I believe I will spend a meaningful winter holiday．【高分句型二】（希望）
School English Club
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
12．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名． 题目①
假如你是李华，在交换生Peter 的帮助下，你们社团成功地举办了学校的英语才艺展示活动（English Show）．请你用英语给他写一封感谢信，简述感谢他的原因以及你从他身上学到了什么．
提示词语： activity， design， advice， creative， helpful， patience 提示问题：●What did Peter do to help？ ●What have you learned from him？ Dear Peter，
I'm writing to thank you for your great help． ． Thank you again for everything you have done for us．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
It's no surprise that students were crazy about the talk show．学生们对这个脱口秀节目非常着迷，这并不奇怪．
It's no surprise that…不足为奇． 【高分句型二】
Also， you offered valuable suggestions about the opening part of the show， which were quite helpful．
另外，你对节目的开头提出了很有价值的建议，非常有帮助． which引导非限定性定语从句． 【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm writing to thank you for your great help．（写信目的）
You helped us design many amazing activities for the English Show， such as the talk show and the drama． It's no surprise that students were crazy about the talk show． 【高分句型一】Also， you offered valuable suggestions about the opening part of the show， which were quite helpful．【高分句型二】 Thanks to your creative ideas， the show was a great success．（Peter帮助做了什么）
What's more， I have learned a lot while working with you on the show， especially the importance of listening to team members and sharing ideas with them． You were always willing to share your thoughts， and at the same time， listen to different voices． This helped us work more effectively together．（我学到了什么）
Thank you again for everything you have done for us．（再次感谢）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
13．假如你是Li Ming，上周你班同学就\"What can We Do Before Leaving School！\"的话题进行讨论，请你根据下表提示，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法和理由．
Some students Other students
You
注意：1）要点完整，层次清楚，上下文连贯； 2）信中不得使用真实的人名、校名；
3）词数不少于80，信的开头和结尾已为你鞋号，不计入总词数． Dear David，
Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate．The students in our class have different suggestions． Some students think we should collect money before leaving school，because we can buy some gifts for our classmates．Other students believe that we should study hard in order to get good grades in the senior middle school entrance exam．Our aim is to get into a good senior middle school，so we can't spend much time doing some thing else．In my opinion，I think both classmates and study are important．So I think we can take some photos in our daily life．For example，we can take photos when we study or play games together．I think these photos are more meaningful that any gifts．They can remind us of our school life when we leave school．Do you agree with me？ ． I'd like to know your idea．Could you give me some advice？ Best wishes! Yours， Li Ming．
【分析】这是一篇图表作文．内容是将同学们关于\"What can We Do Before Leaving School！\"的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David，并谈谈你的想法和理由．注意信件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．一些学生；存钱买… 2．另一些学生；努力学习 3．我的想法和理由
Collect money，buy… Study hard，…
…
常用到的重点短语： buy sth for sb 买某物给某人 in order to 为了
get good grades 取得好成绩 spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事 take photos 照相
remind sb of 让某人想起… 【高分句型】
1．Some students think ①we should collect money ②before leaving school，③because we can buy some gifts for our classmates．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②before leaving school是省略句，完整表达是before we leave school． ③because引导的原因状语从句，buy sth for sb 买某物给某人
2．Other students believe ①that we should study hard②in order to get good grades in the senior middle school entrance exam．
①that引导的宾语从句，作为believe的宾语 ②in order to 为了，作为目的状语．
3．Our aim is ①to get into a good senior middle school，②so we can't spend much time doing something else． ①动词不定式做表语．
②so连词，表示所以，不能与because连用． 【解答】Dear David，
Last week we held a discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate．The students in our class have different suggestions．Some students think we should collect money before leaving school，because we can buy some gifts for our classmates．（一些同学认为存钱买礼物）【高分句型】Other students believe that we should study hard in order to get good grades in the senior middle school entrance exam．（另一些同学认为努力学习）【高分句型】Our aim is to get into a good senior middle school，so we can't spend much time doing something else．【高分句型】In my opinion，I think both classmates and study are important．So I think we can take some photos in our daily life．For example，we can take photos when we study or play games together．I think these photos are more meaningful than any gifts．They can remind us of our school life when we leave school．Do you agree with me？（我的看法和理由）
I'd like to know your idea．Could you give me some advice？ Best wishes! Yours， Li Ming．
【点评】这是篇纲要作文，题目中对写作内容已经做了规定，先陈述同学们的观点，再写自己的想法和理由，具体内容还需自己去补充完善．文章可以使用第一和第三人称，时态
主要用一般现在时．在写作中可适当使用连接词，增加文章的流畅和逻辑性．
这篇作文紧扣提纲，内容完整充实，而且陈述清晰，逻辑紧密．文章在陈述观点时是用来不同表达方式，如Some students think，Other students believe，In my opinion等，表达多样化．另外文中出现了很多从句，如宾语从句，状语从句等．另外一些句型的准确使用，如remind sb．of sth．使某人想去某事，等等
14．假如你是李华，你们学校国际部携手所在街道推出\"冬奥英语进社区\"的活动，现面向全校学生招募英语志愿者，利用假期为社区居民进行英语培训。请你用英语写一封申请信，说明你具备哪些优势，以及你为什么想要申请成为志愿者。
提示词语：be good at，experience，communicate，outgoing，make a difference 提示问题：
•What qualifications（素质）do you have for the volunteer work？ •Why would you like to be a volunteer？ Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer in the program. . I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I have read the requirements you have listed，and I am confident that I have the qualification of serving as a volunteer.我已经阅读了你列出的要求，我相信我有资格成为一名志愿者。表语从句
【高分句型二】
Besides，I am good at communication and helpful.另外，我善于沟通，乐于助人。be good at擅长
【解答】Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to apply to become a volunteer in the program.I have read the requirements you have listed，and I am confident that I have the qualification of serving as a volunteer.【高分句型一】 I have studied English for ten years and I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.Besides，I am good at communication and helpful.【高分句型二】（优势）So I have the ability to teach them some common English.Helping others makes me feel happy.（原因） If I am considered qualified for being the volunteer，I will value it and do all I can to make a contribution to our community.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
15．同学之间的友谊本该是纯真的，但是最近在少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象，有
些学生欺 凌（bully）自己的同学，对同学造成了伤害，请你写一篇 80 词左右文章，说说你对此事的看法， 要求如下：
1．写写你身边曾经发生过的或你听说过的校园欺凌事件（school﹣bullies ），以及你对这件事的看 法．
2．请给那些被欺凌的同学三点建议，该如何面对同学的欺凌． 3．呼吁大家都来阻止校园欺凌，共建平安美好校园． 注意： 词数不少于 80． _________．
【分析】【高分句型一】
First， when this kind of thing happens， you must ask your teacher or parents for help．首先，当这种事情发生时，你必须向你的老师或父母寻求帮助． when引导时间状语从句． ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助． 【高分句型二】
Second， if possible， run away or find a safe place as quickly as possible．第二，如果可能的话，尽快逃离或者找到一个安全的地方． if引导条件状语从句． as quickly as possible尽快．
【解答】Recently，some students bully their classmates in a small number of schools and it causes harm to the students．（现象）
Last week， there was a school bullying in our school． A boy in seventh grade was blackmailed for money by some boys in ninth grade．The little boy disagreed．As a result，he was badly beaten．（身边的事例）
If you were the boy， what would you do？ Here is some advice．First， when this kind of thing happens， you must ask your teacher or parents for help．【高分句型一】Second， if possible， run away or find a safe place as quickly as possible．【高分句型一】Third， if you can't run away， protect yourself and don't fight back．（建议）
I hope everyone can stop school﹣bullies and build a safe and beautiful schools together．（呼吁）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
16．朋友对每个人的一生都很重要．下面请你以\"How to Make Friends\"为题，写一篇关于如何交友的英文短文．
写作要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右．参考词汇：similar interests； be afraid to； good listener； be friendly
________________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
Second， don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at．
第二，不要害怕向别人展示你真正擅长的东西．本句使用了宾语从句what you are really good at． 【高分句型二】
Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed． 你的朋友遇到困难时，试着帮助他们，因为患难中的朋友才是真正的朋友．本句使用了较复杂的句型，时间状语从句when they are in trouble；原因状语从句because a friend in need is a friend indeed． 【解答】
How to Make Friends
Friends are important in our daily life．Here are some tips for you to make friends．
First，It's hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time．So you'd better take an active part in activities with people around．（ 积极与身边的人一起参与活动）Second， don't be afraid to show people what you are really good at．【高分句型一】Talk about the things you like best．（展示自己，谈论自己喜欢的事情）Third， look at people in the eyes when you talk to them． Be a good listener． Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself．（交谈技巧）Last but not least， be friendly to a lot of people． Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed．【高分句型二】（对人友好，帮助人）
In this way， you'll have a bigger group to choose from and have more chances to make friends．（总结）
【点评】本题要求以\"How to Make Friends\"为题写一篇短文，对于这种命题形式加提示性词语的作文，一定要紧扣提示性词语写作，避免跑题偏题．提示内容就是本文的写作要点．这些要点构成写作的基本框架．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．
17．为了使生活更美好，社会需要正能量（positive energy）．生活中，我们需要他人的帮助，也要学会帮助他人．请你在网上给What would you do？本期节目留言，内容包括： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 作文要求：
1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．
2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头已经给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数．
In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop． I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need． The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．
In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\" ．
【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈生活中的正能量，呼吁大家互帮互助．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称． 写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文． 其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1．你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法； 2．说说你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例； 3．呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量． 常用到的重点短语：
adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事 in need在危急中
on one's way to…去某地的路上 try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事 stop doing sth 停止做某事 help sb do sth帮某人做某事 give sb a hand帮助某人 be supposed to应该 【高分句型】
1．I really admire her①because she was②brave enough to help the woman③in need． ①because引导的原因状语从句． ②adj+enough to do sth 足够怎样做某事． ③in need作为后置定语，修饰the woman． 2．I found①it pleasant to ②give others a hand． ①it是形式宾语，动词不定式是真正宾语． ②give sb a hand帮助某人．
【解答】In the program，a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop．I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need．【高分句型】（你对节目中挺身而出的顾客的看法）
The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home．I tried my best to make her stop crying．When I knew she was lost，I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived．I found it pleasant to give others a hand．【高分句型】（你帮助别人的一件事例）
In my opinion，we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others' help．I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy．As the saying goes，\"The rose's in her hand，the flavor in mine．\"（呼吁大家互帮互助，彼此感恩，让社会充满正能量）
【点评】提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．
18．最近，你的班级就\"我的偶像（my idol）\"展开了一次调查。下面表格是你们小组的情况，请根据表格内容并补充你的偶像及原因，写一篇英文短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员 Kate Mike Lily 你
参考词汇：
共和国勋章 the Medal of the Republic 专家：expert
诺贝尔奖：the Nobel Prize 新冠病毒 Covid﹣19 注意：
（1）词数 100 左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）。 （2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 【分析】【高分句型一】
Mike's idol is Lang Lang who is one of the most famous pianists in contemporary China.迈克的偶像是郎朗，他是当代中国最著名的钢琴家之一。 who引导定语从句。 【高分句型二】
She not only looks beautiful but also has a strong musical talent.她不仅长得漂亮，而且还有很强的音乐天赋。
not only…but also…不仅……而且…… 【解答】
My idol
Recently we did a survey in our class in order tol earn about students' idols.Here's a report about my group members' ideas. （点题）
Kate's idol is Mo Yan.Mo Yan is the first Chinese to win the Nobel Prize.He wrote many novels about country life.Mike's idol is Lang Lang who is one of the most famous pianists in
偶像 莫言 郎朗
原因
中国首位诺贝尔获奖者，他写了很多部关于乡村生活
的小说。
中国最著名的钢琴家之一，曾在 2008年的奥运会上表
演，并取得巨大的成功。
钟南山 著名的医生，他带领专家们在和新冠病毒的斗争中拯
救了很多人的生命。他获得了共和国勋章。
？
？
contemporary China.【高分句型一】He performed in the 2008 Olympic Games and achieved great success.Lily's idol is Zhong Nanshan.Zhong Nanshan is a famous doctor.He led the experts in their battle with Covid﹣19 and saved many lives.He received the Medal of the Republic.As far as I'm concerned，my idol is lady gaga.She not only looks beautiful but also has a strong musical talent.【高分句型二】（具体介绍各自的偶像及原因）
There is always something.that we should learn from our idols.Let's act!（总结全文） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．本学期学校校刊征文的题目是\"Shopping in the past and present\"．请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语小短文投稿．要求语言通顺，意思连贯，表达完整．词数在80词左右．文章开头已给出，不算入总词数．
地点 时间
My parent's teenage days
商店
9：00 a．m． ﹣ 9：00
p．m．
now 商店、网络 任何时间
选择 支付方式
少 现金cash
多
现金、手机、电脑等
When my parents were young， they bought things in shops only．Shops were usually open from 9：00 a．m．to 9：30 p．m．．When the shops were closed，they couldn't buy anything．Also，they didn't have many choices，either．They paid only with cash at that time． Today we can buy things in many ways．Shopping is available at anytime anywhere．We can buy things in the shops，on the internet，etc．We can even buy things from other countries without leaving our home．And there are much more choices on line．We can not only pay with cash but also by phone or computer． How convenient we shop today! 【分析】高分句型：
When the shops were closed，they couldn't buy anything．当商店关了门，他们什么也买不到．这里when引导一个时间状语从句．
How convenient we shop today！我们今天购物多方便啊！这里是how引导的一个感叹句，结构how+形容词/副词+主语+谓语！ 【解答】Shopping in the past and present
When my parents were young，they bought things in shops only．Shops were usually open from 9：00 a．m．to 9：30 p．m．．When the shops were closed，they couldn't buy anything．（高分句型）Also，they didn't have many choices，either．They paid only with cash at that time．（介绍过去的商店的情况）
Today we can buy things in many ways．Shopping is available at anytime anywhere．We can
buy things in the shops，on the internet，etc．We can even buy things from other countries without leaving our home．And there are much more choices on line．We can not only pay with cash but also by phone or computer．（介绍现在的商店的情况） How convenient we shop today!（高分句型）（赞扬）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
20．假如你是李强，开学两个多月了，你认识一个好朋友张峰．请根据下列信息向同学介绍一下他的情况．字数为60个字左右，文中不得出现真实姓名和班级名称．所给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数．并将答案写在答题卡对应的横线上． 1、第二中学七年级（3）班学生； 2、家庭成员：祖父母，父母，姐姐和自己； 3、喜欢打篮球和玩电脑； 4、喜爱的食物：鸡肉和牛奶．
Dear classmates，my name is Li Qiang．I have a good friend in this school．
His mane is Zhang Feng．He is from Class Three and Grade Seven of No.2 Middle School．There are six people in his family．They are his grandparents，his parents，his sister and him．He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．He has a healthy eating habit．His favorite food is chicken and milk．Do you like my good friend？
That's all．Thank you for listening． 【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．他喜欢放学后打篮球，喜欢在周末玩电脑游戏． like doing sth 喜欢做某事 play basketball打篮球 play computer games玩电脑游戏 on weekends在周末 句型二：
In study，if I don't understand，he will help me．在学习中，如果我不明白，他会帮助我的． if引导的条件状语从句
【解答】答案：Dear classmates，my name is Li Qiang．I have a good friend in this school．His mane is Zhang Feng．He is from Class Three and Grade Seven of No.2 Middle School．（第二中学七年级（3）班学生）There are six people in his family．They are his grandparents，his parents，his sister and him．（家庭成员）He likes playing basketball after school and he likes playing computer games on weekends．【高分句型一】（喜欢打篮球和玩电脑）In study，if I don't understand，he will help me．【高分句型二】He has a healthy eating habit．His favorite food is chicken and milk．（喜爱的食物：鸡肉和牛奶．）Do you
like my good friend？
That's all．Thank you for listening．
【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．
21．书面表达，根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上．
最近，中央电视台推出的《朗读者》节目受到广大观众的喜爱，节目通过嘉宾朗读的方式分享自己的心得和故事．作为学生的你，也学过\"Tom Sawyer Paints the fence\"，\"The gift of Magi\"等故事．相信你还读过其他书或故事，请你以\"My favorite book （or story）\"为题，写一篇英语短文介绍你印象深刻、喜欢的书或故事，并谈谈你的感想． 注意事项：（1）词数：80 词左右（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）； （2）内容必须包括下图的要点，需适当发挥；
（3）文中不能出现本人真实的人名和校名，否则答案作废． 内容包括：
提示词：what，when，where，what happened
I would like to share my favorite book （ or story ） with you． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It is such hard work that Tom actually is unwilling to complete it．这是一项艰苦的工作，汤姆实际上不愿意完成它． such…that…如此…以至于… 【高分句型二】
When his friend passes by，Tom pretends to enjoy painting the fence and it is great fun to do it．当他的朋友经过时，汤姆假装喜欢画篱笆，这样做是很有趣的．
when引导时间状语从句；pretend to do sth奖状做某事；it is+形容词 to do sth做某事是…的 【解答】I would like to share my favourite story Tom Sawyer paints the fence with you．（引出下文）
The story Tom Sawyer paints the fence was written by Mark Twain，who was well﹣known around the world because of his interesting novels． （名称和作者）There are some characters in the story，including Tom，Becky，Ben，Aunt Polly and so on．Of course，Tom，the naughty but lovely boy is one of the main characters．（主要人物介绍）
The story took place one afternoon in a town．Tom was required to paint the 3﹣yard﹣long fence by Aunt Polly．It was such hard work that Tom actually was unwilling to complete it．【高分句型一】Suddenly，he thought of an idea．When his friend passed by，Tom pretended to enjoy painting the fence and it was great fun to do it． 【高分句型二】Therefore，his friend became interested and begged Tom for a try．Later on，more boys were tricked into painting the fence and even offered their food and toys．At last，the fence got 3 coats of paint．For Tom，he won Aunt Polly's praise and his friends' toys and food as well．（主要内容）
In my opinion，the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading．（个人观点） 【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
22．假如你是李华，学校学生会正在举办\"畅想未来\"为主题的演讲比赛。请根据内容提示，写一篇题为\"For a better future\"的演讲稿，号召同学们一起为美好的未来而做贡献。 主题：构建更美好的未来
目的：为了减少污染；为了保护野生动物……
建议：在生活中使用清洁能源；不购买野生动物产品…… 要求：文中必须包含所有的内容要点，并适当发挥； 语句连贯，不能在作文中出现学校或学生的真实姓名； 80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear teachers and students，
Good morning!My name is Li Hua.I'm glad to make a speech here. ______________
That's all.Thank you for listening! 【分析】【高分句型一】
We all hope that our earth is a beautiful home.我们都希望我们的地球是一个美丽的家园。We hope that +宾语从句，表示我们希望……。 【高分句型二】
Let's create a better tomorrow!让我们创造一个更美好的明天！Let's+动词原形，表示让我们……。
【解答】Dear teachers and students，
Good morning!My name is Li Hua.I'm glad to make a speech here.
We all hope that our earth is a beautiful home.（主题） 【高分句型一】People and animals live in harmony.We live in a clean and tidy environment without pollution. （目的）In order to build a better future and reduce pollution，we suggest that students use clean energy in their lives.In order to protect wildlife，we don't buy wildlife products.No business，no harm. （建议）Maybe it's just a good wish.The world is ours and the future is ours.Students，let's work together!Let's create a better tomorrow!【高分句型二】 That's all.Thank you for listening!
【点评】写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要
表达的主题，不能出现文章脱节问题，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
23．假如你是李明，是一名初三学生，今年你被学校评为\"校园阅读之星\"．你远在美国的笔友 Mike，听说你过去不喜欢看书，但是现在热爱阅读，想请你介绍在这三年来，阅读在身体、心理、学习等方面给你带来的一些好处．此外，她他也请你给他提一些提升阅读速度的建议．请你给 Mike 发一封电子邮件．
内容包括：（1）阅读的好处（如让我觉得写作更简单；我变得对学习感兴趣；使我内心充满力量，不觉得孤独寂寞等等．）
（2）提升阅读速度的方法（如不要逐字阅读；通过阅读大量书籍；） 要求（1）短文必须包含全部要点，可适当发挥． （2）文中不可出现学校和自己的真实姓名； 字数：80 词左右
Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter． How's everything going？ I think reading is really helpful． I didn't use to
I am looking forward to hearing from you! Yours， Li Ming 【分析】【高分句型一】
Reading can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring more happiness．读书不仅可以帮助我们了解更多的世界，也可以带来更多的快乐． 动名词作主语．
not only…but also 不仅…而且…连接两个对等成分． help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事 【高分句型二】
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's important and necessary for us．是我们养成良好阅读习惯的时候了，因为这对我们来说很重要也是必要的． It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了 because引导的原因状语从句． 【解答】Dear Mike，
Thanks for your letter． How's everything going？
I think reading is really helpful． I didn't use to read books，but now I like reading． I will share my experience with you．（点题）
I think reading is important in the whole life for people．Reading makes writing easier for me． I become interested in learning now． My heart is full of power and I no longer feel
lonely． Reading can not only help us learn more about the world but also bring more happiness．【高分句型】（阅读的好处）
But how to improve reading speed？ Don't read word for word． I think it is important to improve reading speed by reading a lot of books．（提升阅读速度的方法）
It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's important and necessary for us．【高分句型】I will make good use of my summer vacation to read． I believe I will enjoy reading in the summer vacation． （读书计划） I am looking forward to hearing from you! Yours， Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
24．优美的城市需要优秀的市民 （citizen），你的行为影响着城市的形象．请你参考下面调查表中的内容，根据要点提示和写作要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈如何做一个好市民．
Good Behavior In Public
Always
Sometimes
Never A
B
C
① ② ③ ④ ⑤ ⑥
wait for your turn in
line be polite to others give your seat to the
old care for the environment follow rules and obey
signs volunteer your time to
help others
Mostly A：You're the perfect citizen!Keep it up!
Mostly B：Not bad，but think how you can become a better citizen． Mostly C：Oh no!You need to think about other people more!
要点提示：①why it's important to be a good citizen ②ways to be a good citizen
写作要求：①调查表仅供参考，不必填写； ②短文无须写标题； ③词数不得少于80；
④文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名．
【分析】【高分句型一】
we should volunteer to help people in trouble我们应该志愿去帮助处于困难的人． 介词短语做为后置定语，修饰people． 【高分句型二】
If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．如果你能尽力，更多的考虑他人，你就会是一个更好的市民． if引导的条件状语从句．
【解答】We won't have a great city without great citizens．Is your city better or worse because of your behavior？（为什么）As a student，what should we do to be good citizens？
Firstly，we should follow rules and obey signs in public，such as waiting in line and no littering around．Secondly，we are supposed to be polite to others，for example，give our seats to the old．Thirdly，we should volunteer to help people in trouble．【高分句型一】
There are many ways to be a good citizen．If you can try your best，and think about other people more，you will be a better citizen．【高分句型二】（方式）
【点评】写作要抓住要点．要在\"准\"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．
25．假如你是Zhao Lei， 你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法．请根据下表要点提示， 用英语写一封回信．
Advice on Learning Chinese 1． Chinese class， study Chinese characters（汉字）
2． watch Chinese TV programs， read Chinese books， newspapers， magazines and so on． 3．… 4．…
要求：1． 回信必须包含表内要点， 并另增加两条建议， 使文章通顺、连贯： 2． 回信不得使用真实的人名、校名；
3．词数80左右， 开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）． Dear Dave，
I'm glad to hear from you． You asked me about how to learn Chinese well． Here is my advice．
_________________________________________________________________． I hope you can learn Chinese well． 【分析】【高分句型一】
And the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible．
最重要的是记住尽可能多的汉字．the most important thing is to do sth．最重要的是做某事，动词不定式作表语；as…as possible尽可能……的． 【高分句型二】
Third， singing or listening to Chinese songs helps you learn more Chinese words as well． 第三，唱或听中文歌曲也有助于你学习更多的中文．动名词短语singing or listening to Chinese songs 作主语；as well也． 【解答】Dear Dave，
I'm glad to hear from you． You asked me about how to learn Chinese well． Here is my advice．
First， as a foreigner， you need to join a Chinese learning activity group，you can learn Chinese characters from your teachers and practice it with classmates． And the most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible．【高分句型一】（参加汉语学习活动小组，记住尽可能多的汉字．）
Second， you'd better read Chinese books， newspapers and magazines．You can also watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs．（阅读中文书报杂志，看中国的电视节目或DVD） Third， singing or listening to Chinese songs helps you learn more Chinese words as well．【高分句型二】（唱或听中文歌曲）
Finally， you can make some Chinese friends． Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you，too． You can learn more about China．（结交一些中国朋友）
I hope you can learn Chinese well．（希望） Yours， Zhao Lei
【点评】这是一篇图表作文，题目要求就学习汉语的方法提建议． 在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡，如题中的first，second等等；也要适当运用复合句和固定搭配给自己的作文增加亮点．
26．4 月23 日是世界读书日（World Reading Day），你们班级组织了一次活动，目的是想了解同学们的阅读情况．请根据以下要点写一篇文章，向你的同学介绍你自己的阅读情况． 要点：
1．How often do you read books？
2．How many books have you read in the past two years？
3．What kind of books do you often read？And what do you like about them？ 4．What do you get from reading？
注意：1．词数90 左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2．须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺．
April 23rd is World Reading Day．I'd like to tell you something about my reading habits． I read books three or four times a week and I usually read more at weekends．In the past two years，I have read about 10 books．I think it's not enough．If I have time，I will read more．I like reading books about history．I think history stories are interesting and I can learn more about the history of China and the world． To me，reading is a way of relaxing after a hard day's work．I can get pleasure from reading，too．What's more，books open up a whole new world to me． 【分析】【高分句型一】
If I have time，I will read more．如果我有时间，我会读更多． if引导条件状语从句 【高分句型二】
I think history stories are interesting and I can learn more about the history of China and the world．我认为历史故事是有趣的，我可以学会更多关于中国和世界的历史． I think+宾语从句 learn about 了解关于…
【解答】April 23rd is World Reading Day．I'd like to tell you something about my reading habits．I read books three or four times a week and I usually read more at weekends． （多久读一次书） In the past two years，I have read about 10 books．I think it's not enough．If I have time，I will read more．（读了多少书）【高分句型一】I like reading books about history．I think history stories are interesting and I can learn more about the history of China and the world．（经常读的书遗迹原因）【高分句型二】
To me，reading is a way of relaxing after a hard day's work．I can get pleasure from reading，too．What's more，books open up a whole new world to me．（从阅读中得到了什么）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
27．Please write about one of your experiences （经历） of not giving up． （No more than 60 words） 【分析】略 【解答】略 【点评】略
28．假设你是来自澳大利亚的学生 Henry 在阳光中学七（1）班进行交流学习，请 根据你的 happiness chart 向在澳大利亚的父母描述一下 你在中国的校园生活． Henry's happiness chart
Love
Subject
Homework
Like Dislike
Teachers &classmate
Sports
Classmates &library
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；可适当发挥； 3．词数 80 左右，邮件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数． Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．________________． All the best，
Henry
【分析】【高分句型一】
I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting．
我喜欢所有的科目，因为它们很有趣．because引导原因状语从句． 【高分句型二】
I think my school life is very fun．
我认为我的学校生活很有趣．I think+宾语从句． 【解答】Dear dad and mum，
I am very happy to tell you something about my school life in China．（点题）
My teachers are friendly to me，so I love them very much．My classmates often help me，so I like to play with them．I like all the subjects，because they are very interesting． 【高分句型一】I have to do homework after school，so I dislike it．I love sports，so I often play it with friends after class．（具体描述喜欢和不喜欢的） In all，I think my school life is very fun．【高分句型二】（总结全文） All the best． Henry
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
29．
Dear boys and girls，
It is our duty to make our city a better place to live． However， we can see some bad behavior（行为） around us． Let's write an article to encourage our citizens（市民） to take action and make our city a greener place． The following pictures may help you．
注意：1． 次数 80 左右，注意分段，短文的题目和开头已写好，不计入总词数； 2． 请结合图片信息进行描述并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．
3． 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息． 参考词汇：公共交通：public transport；节约用电：save the power
How to make our city greener
It is our duty to make our city greener． ．
【分析】【高分句型一】
We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking．通过骑自行车或步行，这样就可以避免交通阻塞，减少空气污染．
and是并列连词，连接的是两个相同的谓语，by是介词，意思是\"通过某组织方式\"． 【高分句型二】
We should recycle something that can be reused．我们应该回收可以再利用的东西． that引导定语从句．
【解答】How to make our city greener It is our duty to make our city greener．（点题）
As students，it's our duty to help build a green city．We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking．【高分句型一】We should turn off the lights when leaving． （随手关灯）We should also save water and paper． （节约用水和纸）We should recycle something that can be reused．【高分句型二】（循环利用）Try to walk or take a bike to school． （绿色出行）We mustn't throw rubbish or spit anywhere．（不能扔垃圾和随地吐痰）In this way，we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life．And we'd better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful．（多植树） In a word，everyone can play a part in building our city．（总结全文）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
30．Peter是一名初三的学生．运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化．请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文．
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数． Sport makes a difference
Peter is a Grade 9 student． ．
【分析】本文给出的材料较为详细，动笔之前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作，根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用第三人称和一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时进行叙述．注意时态，人称，要将题目要求的要点列举从来，注意固定词组搭配． 高分句型：
①He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates，so he decided to do sport．他想和他的同学一样健康，所以他决定做运动．在句子中，want to do sth想做某事，后面跟的是to引导的不定式短语，作宾语，as healthy as 和某某一样健康，as…as和…一样，中间跟的是形容词或者副词的原形，decide to do 想做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式短语．
②What's more，he is very good at playing football．更重要的是，他很擅长踢足球．be good at doing 擅长做某事，后面跟的是动词的ing形式． 【解答】Sport makes a difference
Peter is a Grade 9 student．He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine．He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates，so he decided to do sport（高分句型）．（介绍Peter的基本情况）
He joined Xuanwu Football Club and practised hard there．Because of football，his life has changed a lot．He finds himself much healthier than before．Now，he has grown into a tall strong guy．What's more，he is very good at playing football（高分句型）．Last month，he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award．（重点介绍他所参加的足球俱乐部）
Peter needn't take a lot of medicine any more．Sport makes a great difference to his life．（运动带给Peter的变化）
【点评】图表类写作题一向是中考书面表达中的难点．它不像看图叙事和提示作文那样直观明了，文体多以说明文和议论文为主．考查时要求同学们根据所给的图表、数据等进行分析、研究，阅读其中的文字和说明，弄清各种信息之间的关系，提炼要点，然后组织语言进行写作，必要时还要加入作者自己的观点．文章应包括图表所示内容，但不必全部写到；叙述调查结果时要避免重复使用百分比；最重要的是要有表明自己观点的句子．书写要规范，包括大小写、标点符号等．写完之后还要注意认真检查，改正错误．
31．新年将至，同学们都将收到长辈的红包．校园英语报拟针对1． \"如何合理使用零花钱，过有意义新年\"展开讨论．艾迪同学利用班会时间统计了本班同学想法，并梳理投稿．统计结果如下：
注意事项：
1． 稿件须说明具体购物理由，可自由发挥，要求合乎情理、语句通顺、意思连贯； 2． 词数在 60 个左右．稿件的首尾已在答题卷给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 稿件必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效． __________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
All my classmates talk about how to spend the pocket money in the class meeting．
我所有的同学都在班会上谈论如何花零花钱．本句使用了\"疑问词+动词不定式\"结构 how to spend the pocket money． 【高分句型二】
Ten want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy these things．
人想给贫困地区的孩子买暖和的衣服或健康的食物因为他们没有足够的钱买这些东西．because因为，引导原因状语从句；have enough money to do sth．有足够的钱做某事． 【解答】Spring Festival is coming． Every student can get lots of red packets． All my classmates talked about how to spend the pocket money in the class meeting．【高分句型一】（开篇点题）
Twenty﹣five of us want to buy some books with the pocket money because they think they can learn a lot from books．（25个人想用零花钱买些书） Fifteen want to buy presents for their parents because they want to give thanks to them in this way．（15个人想给父母买礼物） Ten want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy these things．【高分句型二】（10个人想给贫困地区的孩子买暖和的衣服或健康的食物）
All the ideas are wonderful． We hope everyone can have a meaningful new year．（希望） 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作．要适当运用复合句和固定搭配给自己的作文增加亮点．
32．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读下列导图，用英文写一篇短文， 贴在 School Newsletter 上．
Big fires Facts：
●in Australia， in summer， ●hot， dry， less rain； bush fires Results： ●800 buildings ●animals like Koalas ●thick fog … Your feelings： ……
Possible causes： ●humans' activities ●……
注意事项：
1． 短文必须包括以上要点，省略处必须补充细节，做适当发挥； 2． 词数在 80 个左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 文章必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效． Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is ____________________________________． We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth． 【分析】【高分句型一】
The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．
森林如此干燥，在这种天气下很容易着火．本句使用了so…that（ 如此……以至于）引导的结果状语从句 【高分句型二】
I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．
我很难过，尽管这是一场严重的自然灾害．although尽管，虽然，引导让步状语从句． 【解答】Big fires hit Australia． One quarter of the whole country is on fire．
It's December now but the weather there is hot and dry． There's less rain this year than usual． Many bush and forest fires happen． Over 800 buildings fell down． Thousands of Koalas died． There's thick fog everywhere．（描述火灾情况：事实和后果）
Humans' activities mainly lead to these fires． The earth is getting warmer． The forests are so dry that they can catch fire easily on such weather．【高分句型一】（火灾的原因） I feel very sad，although it's a serious natural disaster．（感受） We have only one earth． We should do something to protect our earth．
【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结
构以便得到较高的分数．
33．新年将至，每位同学将收到来自长辈的红包．初一（1）的同学们在班会课上，关于如何合理地利用零花钱，过一个有意义的新年，展开讨论，各抒己见．要点如下：
方式 买书 为父母 …… 为贫困地区儿童 …… 注意事项：
1． 短文必须包括以上要点，省略处必须补充细节，做适当发挥； 2． 词数在60个左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息； 4． 文章必须写在答题卡对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部分无效．
Spring Festival is coming． Every student can get lots of red packets． Students in Class 1， Grade 7 talk about how to spend their pocket money in the class meeting．
Some students want to_________________________________________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books．
一些学生想用他们的零花钱买一些书，因为他们可以从书中学到很多东西．want to do sth 【高分句型二】
Some want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy them．
一些人想给贫困地区的孩子买暖和的衣服或健康的食物，因为他们没有足够的钱去买． 【解答】Spring Festival is coming． Every student can get lots of red packets． Students in Class 1， Grade 7 talk about how to spend their pocket money in the class meeting．（点题） Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books． 【高分句型一】Some want to buy presents for their parents because they want to give their thanks to their parents in this way． Some want to buy warm clothes or healthy food for the children in poor areas because they don't have enough money to buy them．【高分句型一】（方式原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
原因 …… …… ……
34．根据所给中文要点，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你理想中的学校．要求语句通顺，意思连贯．要点：
早上9点开始上课，因此不用早起．
下午3点放学，放学后有很多时间进行课外活动． 吃午饭时可以和朋友们聊天或听音乐．
每天只有一小时的作业，可以花很多时间跟朋友们练习打棒球． 有很多伙伴愿意帮我辅导我的功课，他们都是我的偶像．
My ideal school
_________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
I spend an hour on my homework every day．
我每天花一个小时做作业．spend…on…在…上花费… 【高分句型二】
We can spend a lot of time practicing baseball with your friends．
我们可以花很多时间和你的朋友练习棒球．spend…doing sth花费…做某事． 【解答】My ideal school
My ideal school is big and beautiful，with a library，a laboratory，a playground and so on．（点题）My ideal school usually starts with morning exercises and starts at 9 o'clock，so we don't have to get up early． The school day finishes at 3：00 p．m．There are all kinds of activities after school．During lunch， we can chat with your friends or listen to music． I spend an hour on my homework every day．【高分句型一】 We can spend a lot of time practicing baseball with your friends．【高分句型二】Many partners would like to help me with my homework． They are my idols．（具体介绍学校）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
35．为了缓解疫情对我们的影响，进一步促进社会经济的复苏，我们现在鼓励人们开始发展地摊经济（street vending economy）．这引发了学生们讨论这种经济形式给我们带来的利与弊．为此，学校英文报社将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题．你采访了一些同学，写了一篇题为\"What street vending brings us\"的报道．内容如下： 要求：1．短文需包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 2．省略号处展开合理想象；
3．词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
What street vending brings us
Our society has been affected by the spread of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（新冠肺炎）， so it is time for us to introduce a new economy， street vending， to our society， hoping to fasten the development of our economy． ____________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
We can buy what we need in our neighborhood．我们可以在附近买到我们需要的东西． what引导宾语从句． 【高分句型二】
There is not much guarantee for the quality of the goods．这批货物的质量没有多少保证．
there be句型表示某地有某物． 【解答】What street vending brings us
Our society has been affected by the spread of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（新冠肺炎）， so it is time for us to introduce a new economy， street vending， to our society， hoping to fasten the development of our economy．（点题）
The street vending has many advantages． We can buy what we need in our neighborhood． In addition， the prices of goods are not too high． Because we can see the real things， we are not easy to be cheated． However， it may cause traffic jam． The quality of the goods may be bad．（利和弊）
In my opinion， we should develop this kind of economy． In this way， many people can take part in．Street vending can make the society develop faster． This can provide more chances to make money for more people．（我的观点）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
36．假如你是Amy，你所在的小区正在进行\"模范家庭\"的评选，请根据下表提示要点，给你所在的社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
要求：（1）推荐信的内容必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥，不能简单翻译； （2）词数70字左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； （3）表达中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend my family for \"Model family\" in our neighborhood this year.___________
I hope we can get the award.I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully，
Amy
【分析】【高分句型一】
In my neighbourhood，we get along well with our neighbours.在我家附近，我们和邻居们相处得很好。
get along well with与……和睦相处。 【高分句型二】
What's more，we think it is important to live a green life.更重要的是，我们认为过绿色生活很重要。
it is+形容词 for sb to do sth某人做某事是……的。
【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，
I would like to recommend my family for \"Model family\" in our neighborhood this year.（点题） There are five people in my happy family.They are my grandparents，my parents and me.In my family，we respect each other and take care of each other.We all work hard to make progress. In my neighbourhood，we get along well with our neighbours.【高分句型一】When we have problems，we are always ready to help.People here are like a big family.
What's more，we think it is important to live a green life.【高分句型二】So we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment.Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood.It's really beautiful.
Last but not least，my family members like to work for charity.We often volunteer to help people in need.We have sent them lots of donations.（介绍自己的家庭） I hope we can get the award.I am looking forward to your answer.（希望）
Yours faithfully， Amy
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
37．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是初二学生李华，你的英国朋友 Chris 想要了解北京。请你介绍一下北京这座城市。可以从北京的天气、著名景点、文化、交通等方面中选择至少两点进行介绍。 提示词语：season， famous， visit， beautiful， culture
【分析】【高分句型一】
It has four distinct seasons，which have different characteristics.它有四个不同的季节，有不同的特点。
which引导定语从句。 【高分句型二】
There are many places of interest in Beijing， such as the Great Wall， the Summer Palace， the Imperial Palace and so on.北京有许多名胜古迹，如长城、颐和园、故宫等。 such as例如…… 【解答】
Beijing City
Beijing is the capital of China. It has four distinct seasons，which have different characteristics.【高分句型一】（季节）There are many places of interest for you to visit in Beijing， such as the Great Wall， the Summer Palace， the Imperial Palace and so on.【高分句型二】（景点）Beijing Opera is a very famous traditional culture.（文化）The subway in Beijing is the most convenient way to get around.（交通） Welcome to Beijing.（表示欢迎）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
38．假定你是苏海，你的美国朋友David给你发了下面的邮件，请仔细阅读邮件并根据信中的内容和生活实际用英语回复，可适当发挥．
To：suhai@163．com From：david@hotmail．com Subject：relationship
Dear Su Hai，
I have a problem and I don't know how to deal with it．I have two elder sisters． They're both clever and always do everything well．I feel I can never be as good as them． I am worried about the following problems these days．Can you give me some help？ ◆Should I just be myself or make a change？ ◆How can I let my parents feel proud of me？ ◆Can you share one of your experiences with me？ Best wishes， David
注意：1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
Thanks for your email．I'm very sorry to hear that ． I hope my answers will be of some help to you．
Best wishes，
Su Hai
【分析】【高分句型一】
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．你最好不要和你的姐妹们比较． had better do sth最好做某事．
【高分句型二】
But I do my best to work hard．但我尽我最大的努力工作． do one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事． 【解答】Dear David
Thanks for your email．I m very sorry to hear that you are very worried these days．（表示同情）
You'd better not compare yourself to your sisters．【高分句型一】I think you just need to be yourself instead of trying to be like someone else．Remember that you and your sisters are all smart in different ways．Develop your own interests，and don't be afraid to fail．You can be as special as your sisters are．In fact，parents love each child．I think they will understand you and feel proud of you．（建议）
My brother often does better in study than me．But I do my best to work hard．【高分句型二】My parents understand me and they often give me help．It doesn't matter who is the best．The most important thing is we should be ourselves and never give up．Then we will feel much better．（分享自己的经历）
I hope my answers will be of some help to you（希望）
Best wishes．
Su Hai
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
39．你们班有很多电视迷，很多同学不知道选择什么节目，你决定推荐央视的《朗读者》给同学们．
1．由董卿主持，每次涵盖不同主题，深受人们喜爱，值得观看； 2．朗读让人认识世界，增长知识； 3．邀请不同人来朗读，讲述感人故事；
4．比如，一位父亲通过读一封信来表达对儿子的爱； 5．这个节目鼓励我们……我们应该……
注意：1．必须包括上述所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2．要点中第5点省略号处请用2﹣3句话合理发挥； 3．词数90个左右，短文开头不计入总词数． 参考词汇：主持：host
A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers．I would like to recommend it to you．____________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
It is popular with people．它深受人们欢迎． be popular with受……欢迎 【高分句型二】
This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different
people to show our feelings by reading aloud．这个节目鼓励我们阅读尽可能多的书籍，并与不同的人交流，通过大声朗读表达我们的感情．
encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事；as…as…和…一样；by doing sth通过做某事． 【解答】A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers．I would like to recommend it to you．（点题）
This program is hosted by Dong Qing with different topics everytime．It is popular with people．【高分句型一】It is worth watching．（深受喜爱） It tries to tell viewers that reading helps people know about the world and improve their knowledge．（朗读让人认识世界，增长知识） It invites different people to read aloud and tell the moving stories behind them．（节目内容） For example，once a father showed his son his love by reading a letter．（举例说明） This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different people to show our feelings by reading aloud．【高分句型二】We should try to be a good reader．（节目的意义）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
40．暑假即将到来，很多家长想让孩子参加暑假学习班，但学生对此意见不一．初二（1）班的学生就\"学生是否应该上暑假学习班\"展开了热烈的讨论，讨论结果如下．
注意：
1．词数90字左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．包含所有要点，可适当发挥；要求语句通顺、意思连贯、书写整洁； 3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称． 【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．一些人认为孩子们应该趁他们这个年纪学习能力很强的时候去多学习一些新知识．
have ability to do sth有能力做某事 as much as possible 尽可能多 句型二：
Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．在做某种特定的事情的时候，那些拥有多重技能的孩子会比
那些没有参加过培训课的小孩子更加灵活、聪明． who引导的定语从句 training classes 培训课
【解答】答案：It is quite common phenomenon that many parents will bring their children to all kinds of classes as long as their children have weekends or holidays．This kind of situation has been hot discussed among public．Some people hold that children deserve to have play time as much as possible．They have a lot of homework to do，and they don't have much time left．（反对者的观点）
Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp new knowledge．【高分句型一】Summer classes help them review and learn new content and prepare for the new term．（赞成者的观点）
Standing on my point of view，I'm convinced that children should be sent to training class to learn as much as possible so that they can be more brilliant．Firstly，training class can broaden children's knowledge．For almost all children，they have very limited knowledge．But if they are sent to training class，they can learn various knowledge of life．Thirdly，children can be more outstanding in the future compared with those who don't attend training class．Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing certain kinds of things．【高分句型二】（我的观点）
All in all，sending kids to training classes will do a lot of good to children's future．
【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．
41．假如你是学校的一名小记者，你对学校\"最美志愿者\"Abby进行了一次采访。请你根据以下采访记录写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况。
兴趣爱好
（1）喜欢看书 （2）喜欢旅游
感人事迹
（1）为患重病的同学筹集医疗费用 （2）……（自拟一点）
暑假志愿计划 （1）参加慈善活动
（2）……（自拟一点）
要求：
（1）词数90左右。短文开头已写好，不计入总词数； （2）所写内容必须包括表格中的所有的信息，并作适当的发挥； （3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Abby is presented with \"the Most Beautiful Volunteer\" in our school. 【分析】【高分句型一】
When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels.当她小的时候，她读中国四大古典小说。when引导时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse.今年夏天，她决定告诉人们保护环境，因为她发现环境开始恶化。decide to do sth开始做某事；because引导原因状语从句。
【解答】Abby is presented with \"the Most Beautiful Volunteer\" in our school.She likes reading.She spends an hour reading books every day.When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels. 【高分句型一】And she likes travelling，too.She has visited many places in the west of our country.This helped her learn more about the country.（兴趣爱好）
Abby organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family.The boy got a serious disease.With Abby's support，the boy was cured after the operation.Last year，she found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.（感人事迹）
This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the environment is changing for the worse.【高分句型二】If possible，she may take part in some charities to work for more people.（暑假计划）
She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful.（感受）
【点评】这是一篇图表作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
42．最近你班学生以\"假期该出去旅游还是待在家里？\"为题做了一个调查．调查发现一些学生赞成出去旅游，还有一些学生认为应该待在家里．请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍这次调查情况并发表你的观点．
观 点 出去旅游 待在家里 你的观点
理 由
可增长见识；可放松身心
参加网络学习；完成学校作业；帮父母做家务
理由（自拟1﹣2点）
注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要遂词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Going out for a trip or staying at home？
Going out for a trip or staying at home during the holidays，which is better？Students in our class have different ideas．
Some students think__________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
A trip can not only relax ourselves but also give us a good understanding of nature and society，旅行不仅能让我们放松，而且能让我们更好地了解自然和社会． not only…but also…不但……而且……
【高分句型二】
On the other hand，our parents are very busy with their work，so we need to help them do more housework during the holidays．另一方面，我们的父母工作很忙，所以我们需要在假期帮助他们做更多的家务． be busy with sth 忙于某事．
【解答】Going out for a trip or staying at home？
Going out for a trip or staying at home during the holidays，which is better？Students in our class have different ideas．
Some students think that they should go out for a trip．A trip can increase their knowledge，broaden their horizons and relax their body and mind．What's more，they may make new friends during the trip．（出去旅游的好处） But others think they should stay at home，they should learn online and finish their homework．They also help their parents do some housework．（待在家里的理由）
I think we should go out for a trip．A trip can not only relax ourselves but also give us a good understanding of nature and society．【高分句型一】But at the same time，I think we should also arrange our study reasonably and finish our homework well．（我的观点）On the other hand，our parents are very busy with their work，so we need to help them do more housework during the holidays．【高分句型二】Helping them can not only make them happy but also make us learn some life skills．
【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
43．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的学生非常重要．最近你们学校就\"健康的生活习惯\"话题向全体学生征文．请你根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，向学校投稿． 健康的生活习惯
早睡早起 适当锻炼 合理饮食 注意卫生 …（补充1点）
你的想法 注意：
1．词数90左右．短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
2．短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺． 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
Keeping healthy
It is so important to make\"keeping healthy\"a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits． ． 【分析】【高分句型一】
…（自拟1点）
Staying up too late is bad for our health．熬夜对我们的健康有害． staying up too late 熬夜太晚．动名词作主语． be bad for对……有坏处． 【高分句型二】
As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．作为九年级的学生，我们必须花更多的时间在学习上． spend on在……上花费…… 【解答】Keeping healthy
It is so important to make \"keeping healthy\" a part of our day﹣to﹣day living habits．（点题） All of us want to be healthy． We should get enough sleep during the night and get up early． Staying up too late is bad for our health．【高分句型一】 We should do more exercise to build up our bodies．We must also have a balanced diet． We need to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．
Keeping good habits can help us prevent the disease． Remember to wash our hands properly before eating， after going to the bathroom and getting home． If necessary， we should wear masks．Most of us have teenage problems． We can reduce stress by listening to music， reading books or talking to our parents， friends and teachers for help．（健康的生活习惯） As Grade Nine students， we have to spend more time on study．【高分句型二】 However， keeping good habits and staying happy are ways to be healthy．（我的想法）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
44．假如你是李俊，你的美国朋友David想在中国认识更多的朋友．你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友王浩介绍给他．请你结合以下要点，完成该邮件．
年龄、外貌 个性 爱好 其他情况
15岁，方脸，高个子 慷慨、乐于助人，…（自拟1点） 痴迷于DIY，上周…（自拟1点）
对了解不同种类的鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的成员；
最喜欢冬季，因为他喜欢…（自拟2点）
理想
长大后周游世界
注意：1．词数90左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数． 2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．
Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up．
I hope you can make friends with him．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival． Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【分析】高分句型：
So he wants to ravel round the world when he grows up．所以他长大后想周游世界．这里want to do sth表示想做某事．
I hope you can make friends with him．我希望你能和他交朋友．这里hope后面跟的是一个宾语从句．
【解答】Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Hao to you． （引出话题） He is 15 years old．He is tall and has a square face．（年龄，外貌）
Wang Hao is generous and helpful．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．
（个性）He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me． （爱好）He is interested in learning about different kinds of birds and now he is a member of the Bird watching Society．Among/Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．（其他情况）
He likes traveling．So he wants to travel round the world when he grows up（高分句型）．（理想）
I hope you can make friends with him．（高分句型） Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．（希望） Best wishes． yours， Li Jun
【点评】这是一篇话题作文，作文题目已经给出，而且列出了要求．写作文时要仔细审题，每一条都要写到，注意前后句的连接，不要遗漏要点，必要时可适当发挥．
45．David参加了一个社区的交友活动，请根据下表所提示的内容，介绍他的新朋友Tom．
学习 1．爱学习．努力学习，所有学科都学得很好．
2．爱助人．经常帮助同学复习功课．
爱好 1．爱运动．篮球打得好，下学期想进入校篮球队．
2．爱动物．养兔子当宠物，并能照顾好．
评价 对Tom的评价（自拟）
要求： （1）词数80左右．短文开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数； （2）条理清楚，语意连贯；紧扣主题，适当发挥；书写规范，标点正确； （3）短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名． Tom is my new friend． 【分析】【高分句型一】
He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．他擅长所有的科目，所以他总能取得好成绩． be good at擅长… 【高分句型二】
I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．我认为汤姆不仅是一个聪明的学生，也是一个很好的朋友．
I think+宾语从句；not only…but also…不仅…而且…
【解答】Tom is my new friend． He is twelve years old． He is tall and thin． He is good at all the subjects， so he can always get good grades．【高分句型一】 He often helps me with my English and I often help him with his Chinese．（学习）He loves sports and plays basketball well．He wants to join the school basketball team next term．He also loved animals．He keeps a rabbit as a pet and takes good care of it．（爱好）I think Tom is not only a clever student， but also a very good friend．【高分句型二】I hope we will be friends forever．（我的评价及希望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
46．假如你叫王燕，看到小宠物主人俱乐部（the Young Pet Owners Club）正在招收新成员，很想参加；请根据下表格提供的信息，用英语写一份申请信，表达你的意愿并恳请俱乐部考虑和答复．
name age personality other information
王燕 14
善良，乐于助人（上周送一迷路小男孩去
警局，并陪他玩儿了两小时） 1．就读于第一中学，最喜欢生物 2．喜爱动物，有一只叫Anny的宠物兔，
一天三次喂它吃胡萝卜 3．正在看一本如何照顾宠物的书
4．梦想将来当一名兽医（a doctor for
animals）
要求：
1．词数80左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2．内容必须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺； 3．文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息． June 25，2015 Dear Sir，
I read your poster yesterday，I'm writing to tell you I'd like to be a member of your club． My name is Wang Yan． ．
I want to join your club because I want to know more about animals．I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club．You can call me on 0512一65436688．
Yours faithfully Wang Yan．
【分析】高分句型： 句型一：
I'd appreciated it if you could possibly consider my application．如果你能考虑我的申请，我很感激．
if引导的条件状语从句
consider one's application考虑某人的申请 句型二：
I want to join your club because I want to know more about animals．我想加入你们的俱乐部因为我想了解更多关于动物的知识 because引导的原因状语从句 want to so sth想要做某事 【解答】答案：June 25，2015 Dear Sir，
I read your poster yesterday，I'm writing to tell you I'd like to be a member of your club． My name is Wang Yan．I'm 14 years old． （年龄）I think I'm fit for the Young Pet Owners Club，because I have worked as an English tutor before，which will help me do the job better．（高分句型）I am very kind，I sent a lost boy to the police station last week and played with him for two hours．（善良）I study at no.1 middle school and I like biology best．（喜欢生物）
I love animals．I have a pet rabbit named Anny．I feed her carrots three times a day．（喜爱动物）I am reading a book on how to care for pets．（正在看一本如何照顾宠物的书）My dream is to be a doctor for animals．（梦想将来当一名兽医）
I think animals are our friends．I'd appreciated it if you could possibly consider my application．【高分句型一】I want to join your club because I want to know more about animals．【高分句型二】I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club．You
can call me on 0512一65436688．
Yours faithfully Wang Yan．
【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．
47．假定你是在苏州学习的新西兰交流学生Andy，你的新西兰同学Kenny给你写了一封电子邮件．
请根据邮件内容，用英语给Benny回一封电子邮件． Dear Andy，
I haven't heard from you since you arrived in Suzhou．Is everything OK with the school you study in？What are your English classes like？How are you getting on？ I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon． All the best! Yours Benny
注意：1．词数90左右．开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量； 2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息． Hi Benny，
Sorry I haven't written till now． ______．
I hope my experience can help you out．
Best wishes!
Andy
【分析】【高分句型一】
It's famous for its pretty gardens，there's lots of delicious local food here．
这里的花园很美，这里有很多美味的当地食物．there be 句型，表示某地有某物． 【高分句型二】
I enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a lot here．
我喜欢我在苏州的生活，因为我可以在这里体验很多．because引导的原因状语从句，因为……．
【解答】Hi Benny，
Sorry I haven't written till now．I'm really busy with the course and making new friends these days．People here are kind and friendly，I am getting on well with them．（就读学校的基本情况） My school starts at 8 a．m．and finishes at 4：30 p．m．After school，we can do some sports to relax．English classes in China are not like ones in England．The texts are easy．（关于英语课程） Suzhou is a beautiful city，it's famous for its pretty gardens，there's lots of delicious local food here．【高分句型一】I enjoy my life in Suzhou because I can experience a
lot here．【高分句型二】（介绍苏州的情况） I hope my experience can help you out．
Best wishes!
Andy
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
48．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的 文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不 要写出你的校名和姓名．
首都北京有很多蕴含历史和文化的旅游景点，如故宫（the Palace Museum）、 长城（the Great Wall）、老舍茶馆（Lao She Teahouse）等．它们吸引了众多外国游客． 假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter即将到北京旅游．请你用英语写一封 电子邮件，向他推荐一个能了解中国历史和文化的景点，告诉他在这个景点可以看到什么或者做些什么，以及他需要做什么准备．
提示词语：ancient buildings，art works，handcrafts （手工艺品），book a ticket 提示问题： Which place do you advise Peter to visit？ What can he see or do there？
What preparations does Peter need to do？ Dear Peter， How is it going？
I'm glad you will come to Beijing． I advise you to visit
If you need any help， please Let me know．
Yours， Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is one of the most famous buildings in China． 它是中国最著名的建筑之一． one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，表示最…之一 【高分句型二】
You'd better bring a camera with you．你最好带上相机． had better do sth最好做某事． 【解答】Dear Peter， How is it going？
I'm glad you will come to Beijing． I advise you to visit the Palace Museum．（点题，建议参观博物馆） It is one of the most famous buildings in China． 【高分句型一】There are many beautiful art works and handicrafts in the Palace Museum． They show the long ancient Chinese culture．You can learn a lot about Chinese history there．（看到的和学到的） Besides， the weather in Beijing is cold． You should wear warm clothes．You'd better bring a camera with
you．【高分句型二】 You can take many beautiful pictures．（需要准备什么） In addition， you need to book the tickets in advance． If you need any help， please Let me know．
Yours， Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
49．假如你是Tom，请根据下面表格的内容，写一篇50词左右的短文介绍一下你的家庭，可以适当发挥．
Family member（家庭成
员） Father Mother Brother Grandfather Grandmother
__________________________ 【分析】【高分句型一】
There are six people in my family．我家有六口人． There be句型，表示某地有某物． 【高分句型二】
She is friendly to her students．她对她的学生很好． be friendly to 对…友好．
【解答】Hi，I am Tom．I have a big and happy family．（点题） There are six people in my family．【高分句型一】They are my grandfather， my grandmother， my father， my mother， my brother and I． （家里有几口人） My grandfather is David． He is a doctor． He works in a hospital． My grandmother is Mary． She is a teacher． She teaches English．She is friendly to her students．【高分句型二】 My father is John． He is a bus driver． My mother is Helen． She is a worker． My brother， Jack and I are students．（具体介绍家人） I love my family．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
John Helen Jack David Mary
A bus driver A worker A student A doctor A teacher
Name
Job
50．这学期你们学校组织同学们开展了一个\"争做文明市民\"的活动．同学们在人际交往、社会公德等方面都比以前有了很大的进步．请你根据下表所提示的要点，以\" To be a civilized citizen\" 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的表现，并谈谈你对这个活动的看法．
表现 人际交往 尊重他人 诚信友善 礼貌待人 乐于助人
社会公德 遵守交规 爱护环境 热心慈善 （自拟一点）
感受 你对这个活动的看法（自拟，至少一点）
注意：1．词数90左右．短文开头部分已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2．短文需包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文中不要出现具体的校名和人名．
To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called \"To be a civilized citizen\" this term． All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．__________________________________________________________________． 【分析】【高分句型一】
They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．
他们知道尊老爱幼是重要的．①know后是省略了that的宾语从句．②it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语． 【高分句型二】
They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries．
他们总是有足够的耐心去倾听他人的快乐和担忧．adj+enough to do sth足够怎样去做某事．
【解答】To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called \"To be a civilized citizen\" this term． All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．（点题） It's really nice to see the students being polite now．They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．【高分句型一】They also realize they should have good manners and be honest．As a result，they are always friendly to others．Moreover，they are willing to help people any time．When they are on the bus，they always give their seats to people in need．They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries【高分句型二】．（人际交往）
Now the students don't just care about themselves．They tell others it's very necessary to follow the traffic rules．They also protect the environment．They spend their spare time on the charity activities．They often raise money to help the poor students in our school．（社会公德） I'm glad to find the students have learnt a lot from this activity．I will learn from them and try to be a civilized citizen as well．（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
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