一观点类
These days/Nowadays, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that____. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
It is not
difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.
To
begin with, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___% of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that ________should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better. （反对的结尾段）
第一段第二句替换句
Whenever it comes to this issue, there will spring up a wide variety of voices.
Whenever it comes to this issue, different people hold different opinions due to their distinct backgrounds and values.
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第一段最后一句替换句
As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the former/latter view.
As far as I am concerned, the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and more appealing to me.
第二段第一句替换句
To prove my viewpoint, some significant arguments can be summarized as follows.
My arguments can be summarized as follows.
如果第一句话填入的是一个名词，则可以用下面这两三句话。
These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after drinking.
These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning drive after drinking
Nowadays，there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap.
最后一段替换段
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Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that ________should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（支持）
There is no doubt that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the preceding discussions. Therefore, I believe that ____ be encouraged rather than discouraged or even banned. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（支持）
There is no doubt that people will have diverse views on the same issue, but my standpoint is clear and well founded in the preceding discussions. Therefore, I believe that ____ be discouraged or banned rather than encouraged. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（反对）
范文：
These days, there is an increasingly hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that private cars are becoming more and more prevalent in China. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of the rapid development of private cars, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
It is not
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difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint. To
begin with, it goes without saying that developing private cars can boost and prompt the local economy to develop more rapidly. What’s more, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more efficiently. One more point that can’t be ignored is that private cars will make our life become more convenient. With a car we can go to places where the regular buses and trains cannot get.
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that the rapid development of private cars should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.
练习: 如今，名人(celebrity)在大学里当客座教授或兼职教授的现象很普遍，对于这种现象，不同的人持有不同的看法，请发表你的观点。
提高版
These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after dinking. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 89% of the drivers have such experiences. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it. Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some argue that it’s normal and acceptable to drive after drinking . They believe 4
that they are able to drink much wine and a little cannot make them stoned. In addition, they hold that they own excellent driving skills and wine will not influence their performance in the slightest. However, there are other people who look at this phenomenon in quite another way. For them, it is of utmost danger to drink before doing such a thing as driving. Besides, drunken drivers can bring about much harm to themselves or some other social problems. Therefore, immediate measures should be taken to put an end to the current situation.
Just as a coin has two sides, so it’s natural for people to have diverse ideas as regards the same issue. So far as I’m concerned, the latter viewpoint seems more convincing and more appealing to me. In other words, drink before driving should be discouraged or even banned in our society. The authorities concerned should play an active role in eliminating this phenomenon.
附加版（适合两个事物之间选择）
These days, one of the most controversial topics arousing general concern is the choice between ___ and ___. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people prefer_____, and regard it as the most important part of life. But other people deem _____ their first choice to be made. So far as I’m concerned, the first/second viewpoint seems more convincing and appealing to me.
It is not
difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.
To
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begin with, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___% of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Though, as every coin has two sides, it’s hard to deny the other choice, my choice is still clear and well founded in the above discussions. Therefore, I hold it beneficial and imperative to maintain that choice, and thus our life and society will be made better.
二 原因/利弊/措施分析类
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____. According to the data given by the relevant government, about _ percent of ___ (have such experiences). This phenomenon, without question, has aroused wide concern. Among the media, we can find a lot of relevant discussions.
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summarized as fallows. First and foremost of all, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ____ % of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better. （反对）
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Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（支持）
第一段第一句替换句
Nowadays，there is a widespread concern in our society about the widening income gap.
第一段替换段
(1) As we can see from the situation, job-hopping has become a common phenomenon among the general public. According to a newspaper survey, about 55% percent of the graduates have changed their job in the first years of their employment. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make more than one changes. Needless to say, this trend will continue for a while in the future.
(2) These days, one of the hottest topics arousing general concern is drive after dinking. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 89% of the drivers have such experiences. Some really keen enthusiasts go so far as to make a habit of it. Needless to say, this phenomenon will continue for a while in the future.
(3) These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____.
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When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, this phenomenon is quite normal (abnormal).
第二段第一句替换句
There are many factors contributing to the above-mentioned phenomenon, but in general, they may come down to three major ones.
第二段如果写的是危害，第一句可以用下面这句：
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some negative effects on our society.
It goes without saying that the negative effects of ____ can be seen clearly in the following aspects.
So far as I’m concerned, I believe that this trend will result in some negative consequences
第二段如果写的是好处，第一句可以用下面这句：
There is no doubt that this trend/phenomenon may have some positive effects on our society.
It goes without saying that the positive effects of ____ can be seen clearly in
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the following aspects.
第二段如果写的是措施,第一句可以用下面这句：
Considering the possible negative aspects of this phenomenon/trend, we should take some effective measures as follows.
第二段如果同时写利弊两个方面, 则可以用下面这个段落:
It is obvious that ____ has advantages as well as disadvantages. Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows. First of all, ______makes people’s everyday life more convenient. In addition, ______ connects its users with the outside world. With a ______, people’s life will be greatly enriched. Nevertheless, it is a pity that every coin has two sides and the disadvantages of _____ can’t be ignored. To begin with, ____. To make matter worse, ______ is most likely to add to your daily expenses.
最后一段备用段落
Considering the possible negative aspects of__this trend__, we may come up with some tentative suggestions as follows. On the one hand, the authorities concerned should make relevant rules and regulations to these promises. On the other hand, the public should be educated to be more self-conscious. Only in these ways, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.(适用于最后一段强调措施的作文)
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范文：
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning the phenomenon that more and more people prefer to raise dogs in the cities. According to the data given by the relevant government, about 70 percent of the families have dogs. This phenomenon, without question, has aroused wide concern. Among the media, we can find a lot of relevant discussions.
There is no doubt that this trend may have some negative effects on our society. First and foremost of all, raising dogs may pollute the environment. We can often see dogs dropping their waste in public places when they are walked outdoors. What’s more, with too many dogs in public places, cases of dogs attacking people are not rare now. One more point that cannot be ignored is that the barking of dogs may disturb the quiet neighborhood.（第二段危害）
Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that this phenomenon should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should take immediate measures to put an end to this trend. Only in this way will our life and society be made better.
三 图表类
As is shown in the diagram/graph/chart/table, some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to the number (percentage) of___ in the past several years. According to the data given in the diagram, we can see that the number
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(percentage) of___ was on a steady rise/decline all the time. In the year of____, it was only about ____, while within no more than ____ years, it went up/down to nearly _____ in ___.
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. First and foremost of all, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___% of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
Based upon what has been discussed above, we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number (percentage) of ____ will keep increasing in the forthcoming years. (中立的结尾)
第一句替换句
What is shown in the diagram/graph/chart/table above shows us clearly that dramatic changes have taken place with regard to ____ in the past several years.
As is depicted in the diagram/graph/chart/table above, some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to ______ in the past several years.
第一段替换段(适合描述多种事物同时表化)
As is shown clearly in the table，some dramatic changes have taken place with regard to the way people spent their holidays in the past several years. In 2000,
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63% of people spent their holidays at home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2009. At the same time, the number of people choosing traveling rose sharply from 37% in 2000 to 76% in 2009.
最后一段可以替换的段落:
Based upon what has been discussed above, I believe these changes are abnormal and will exert negative effects on the society, so the relevant authorities should take immediate measures to prevent the current situation from getting worse. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better. （反对的结尾段）
Based upon what has been discussed above, I believe these changes are quite normal and will exert positive effects on the society. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better. （支持的结尾段）
Taking all these factors into consideration, we may reasonably predict that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years. And if this change can be kept and guided properly, our life as well as our society will be made better.（中立的结尾段）
范文:
As is shown in the diagram, some dramatic changes have taken place with
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regard to the number of recruitment of Master of Engineering in the past several years. According to the data given in the diagram, we can see that the number of recruitment of ME was on a steady rise all the time. In the year of_1998_, it was only about 2500, while within no more than 7 years, it went up to nearly __35,000_ in _2004_. Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned changes may be summarized as follows. First and foremost of all, with the rapid development of Chinese economy and society, the persons with specific abilities are badly needed, especially in high-tech industries. What's more, ME can enable people to find a high-paying job easily. It is said that nearly 100% job hunters with ME can get an ideal post in China nowadays. One more point that can’t be ignored is that the conception of life-study has been commonly accepted by so many Chinese young people that most of them choose to study further after a few years of graduation. Based upon what has been discussed above, we may reasonably predict that with the rapid and further development of our society, the number of recruitment of ME will keep increasing in the forthcoming years.
综合模板
These days, there is a hot topic among the general public concerning ____. When it comes to this issue, people’s views vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of _____, while still some others hold a negative attitude to it. From my point of view, this phenomenon is quite normal (abnormal).
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It is not
difficult for me to put forward some arguments to illustrate my standpoint.
To
begin with, ____. (Based upon a recent Internet survey, about ___% of ____) What’s more, ______. One more point that can’t be ignored is that ________.
From what has been discussed above/Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that______should be encouraged rather than discouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（支持的结尾段）
From what has been discussed above/Based upon what has been discussed above, I do hold that______should be discouraged rather than encouraged. The relevant authorities should play a positive role in guiding this trend. Only in this way, I firmly believe, will our life and society be made better.（反对的结尾段）
如果是分析原因,则第二段第一句用下面这句花
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summarized as fallows.
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