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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成- -篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
One day, when I was a freshman in high school, I saw a kid from my class walking home from school. His name was Kyle. It looked like he was carrying all of his books. I thought to myself: Why would anyone bring home all his books on Friday? He must really be nerd(书呆子)”
As I was walking, I saw a bunch of kids running toward him. They ran at him, knocking all his books out of his arms and tripping him so he landed in the dirt. His glasses went flying, and I saw them land in the grass about ten feet from him. He looked up and I saw this terrible sadness in his eyes. So, I jogged over to him and as he crawled around looking for his glasses, I saw a tear in his eye. As I handed him his glasses, he said, \"thanks!\" There was a big smile on his face. It was one of those smiles that showed real gratitude. We talked all the way home, and I carried his books. He turned out to be a pretty cool kid. The more I got to know Kyle, the more I liked him.
Over next four years, Kyle and I became the best friends. When we were seniors, he had the highest marks in the class and was chosen to give a speech at the graduation ceremony. I teased him all the time about being a nerd. He had to prepare a lot, and I was so glad it wasn't me having to get up there and speak.
Graduation day, I saw Kyle. said. \"Hey big guy, you'll be great!\" He looked at me with one of those looks, the really grateful one, and said \"Thanks,\" smiling.
As he started his speech, he cleared his throat and began. “Graduation is a time to thank those who helped you make it through those tough years. Your parents, your teachers, your siblings, maybe a coach...but mostly your friends. I am here to tell all of you that being a friend to someone is the best gift you can give him or her. I am going to tell you a story.
注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Paragraph 1:
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
I smiled back in tears._________________________________________________________
思路分析
前文主要讲作者上高中时，有一天看到了同班的凯尔带着所有的书回家。一群孩子将凯尔撞倒在地。作者跑过去，帮助凯尔把书和眼镜捡了起来。后来两个人成了好朋友。毕业典礼的时候，凯尔被选去做毕业典礼演讲。他在演讲时，要给大家讲一个故事。那么，下文中，首先要接着叙述凯尔讲的故事。
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他正在讲述我们第一天见面的故事时，我只是不相信地看着我的朋友”他讲述的故事应该出乎我的意料，根据所给关键词 sadness，smile，grateful可以推知，这个故事肯定和凯尔当时的情绪有关系，也与我有关。
②由第二段首句内容“我含着泪回以微笑”可知，第二段可描写故事由悲转喜并且这件事让Karl对作者心存感激，对他的高中生活有很大的影响。最后，作者应该叙述自己听到凯尔讲的故事之后的感受。还要注意第一段的结尾应该有看向作者的细节动作。
2. 续写线索：计划自杀或者弃学——清理书本——遇到作者——开始友情——挽救生命——感恩对视——善意的力量。
3.词汇激活
行为类: 计划自杀：plan to kill oneself; 清理干净 clean out; 扛回家 carry sth. home; 从…拯救某人save sb. from …; 产生巨大影响：make a big difference 情绪类: 闪烁 shimmer 最弱的weakest 感谢的 grateful/thankful
续写句式提炼
1．当我的朋友讲述我们第一天相遇的故事时，我只是怀疑地看着他。
翻译： 2．凯尔计划周末自杀。他谈到他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他妈妈以后就不必这么做了，他正在把他的东西带回家。
翻译： 3．与此同时，我发现他看着我，给了我一个微笑。
翻译： 4．“谢天谢地，我得救了。我的朋友把我从做不可言说的事情中拯救出来。”
翻译： 5．当这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻时，我听到人群中传来喘息声。 翻译： 6．当他的眼睛吸引住我时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着恐惧。
翻译： 7．我含泪笑了。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的举动对他来说有多么大的不同。 翻译： 8．我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，带着同样感激的微笑。
翻译： 9．我突然意识到，我们永远不应该低估自己行动的力量。
翻译： 10．只要一个小小的动作，我们就能改变一个人的生活。无论好坏。
翻译： 参考答案：
1) I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met. 2) Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his
locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. 3) Meanwhile, I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile.
4) \"Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable.\"
5) I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his
weakest moment.
6) When his eyes caught mine, I was able to see fears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
7) I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what a big difference one small
gesture had made to him.
8) I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. 9) It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. 10) With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
篇章成文
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met. Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile, I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile. \"Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable.\" I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine, I was able to see fears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what a big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
课后练习
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
The day my dad gave me a BB gun was my twelfth birthday, and I almost couldn’t help jumping up and down when I saw what it was.
With a smile, he led me outside and showed me how to shoot ― first loading the gun, pumping it a few times, aiming, and, finally, firing. Before handing the gun to me, he said seriously, “I don’t ever want to see you killing anything. That’s not the reason why I bought you this gun.” I thought he was afraid that I’d learn what real power felt like. Anyway, it was okay with me because I figured I’d find many other targets.
“Hey, Mike.” I yelled to my friend upon making one of my greatest discoveries. “Check this out.” I aimed at the top of the telephone pole. “What’re you doing? ” he asked. I fired, and the BB hit the top of the pole, causing a loud “DING” to ring out. “Cool.” Mike said. I smiled like a king ― a smile that grew even wider when Mike couldn’t hit the same target. The good thing was that no matter how many times you shot those things they never broke. Then again, maybe that’s why it got boring.
A few months later, I found myself walking down the street, gun in hand, searching for new targets. I stopped by a telephone pole, popping off a few shots with nothing better to do. Suddenly, a bird swooped (俯冲) down and landed on the wire. It cooed and walked slowly, completely unaware of my watchful eye. Here I was, a bored kid, holding a BB gun, and a bird standing right there in front of me ― and no one around to tell my dad. It was so perfect. I figured it was a sign from God. I aimed straight at the bird, held my breath, and squeezed slowly upon the trigger (扳机). But I hesitated. I was about to shoot a bird, feeling at one moment uneasy, at another excited. The exciting part won. I fired.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1: The bird dropped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it fell__________________________________________________________________________
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Para 2: When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was. __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
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The bird dropped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it fell. I heard it thump into the dirt. Before lowering the gun, I realized what I’d done ― I’d killed my first animal. “Oh no,” My stomach was tied in knots and I prayed, “Oh God, please don’t let it be dead.” The bird lay there with blood streaming from its beak, feathers large and small scattered about. I reached out and rolled it over, but its head drooped lifelessly to the side. After burying it, I hurried home, hiding my BB gun in the closet. (87 words)
Para 2:
When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was. I hesitated, and was momentarily uneasy that guilt crossed my face. My dad, a man of keen perception, quickly went into confrontation mode, asking what really happened. I replied, as if I had to choke the words out of my throat, tears streaming down my face. He didn’t say anything but just looked at me, hand resting on my shoulder. That evening, my dad made me vow to never kill a thing again, explaining that once I got bored of animals, the next target could be something even more priceless.
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