预测作文(一)
Food Safety
1. 食品安全问题令人担忧。
2. 对此,你有什么看法(可从蔬菜、水果滥用农药、激素方面分析)? 下面黄色代表句型或短语。 【范文】
Currently, many problems concerning food safety have popped up. As for me, I believe at least three factors account for these problems.
First, I hold that it is on account for trying to make more money that the food producers aim to reap more profits at the expense of consumers’ health, even life. Second, the overuse of agricultural pesticide has led the food to be very dangerous. Furthermore, some food producers inject hormones into domestic animals or vegetables so as to make them grow more quickly and thus they can turn in more profits. As a result, people’s health has been seriously disturbed and hurt, and they are feeling of insecurity.
All in all, food security has become such a serious concern that our government and related departments are expected to establish laws as soon as possible to forbid such immoral and criminal practice to occur again.
【点评】
首句直接点题,词组pop up意思是“弹起”,这里指食品安全突然间成了一大社会问题。
文章第二部分从蔬菜生产商、水果滥用农药及激素方面阐释了食品安全问题的根源。“以消费者的健康为代价”除了使用at the expense of 还可以使用at the cost of 或者ignoring。最后一段再次点题,并提出了万能解决方案之一,即政府和相关单位要制定法律法规
预测作文(二)
Should we help others in need?
1. 现在经常有这样的现象发生:路上有人摔倒,没人敢上前帮忙。 2. 这是人们的公德心缺失还是其他什么原因呢? 3. 你对此有何看法?
【范文】
Helping others has always been a virtue in traditional Chinese culture. But what’s strange at present is that people dare not show their helping hands to those in need. I would like to elaborate(详细说明) my views on this issue.
Firstly, I think people’s moral sense has degraded, because it did happen that some helper was wrongly accused of being the injurer. So many people find it growingly hard to help others. Secondly, there is no
denying that some tragic events turn out to be traps by people with evil intentions. So common people are becoming more risk-conscious and are more wary of traps and deceits.
In general, I agree to the idea that we should be warm-hearted and offer help as well as look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
【点评】
第一句话介绍背景,使用“美德”virtue一词。第二句话为转折句,除了使用but这个表示强烈转折意味的连接词,还采用了strange和首句形成鲜明对比。
文章第二部分开始阐释人们公德心(moral sense)缺乏的原因。指出原因之一为的确有救助者被冤枉。原因之二是外因。Trap指陷阱,deceit指欺骗。
最后一段表明作者立场,提出既要坚持善良之心也要有防备之心。
预测作文(三)
College graduates’Living Condition
1. 反应大学生毕业生生存状况的词语从“蜗居”、“蚁族”到“鼠族”,
不断涌现。
2. 对于这种现象,你有什么看法? 【范文】
Recently, the poor living condition of some college graduates has brought them two names: One is “ant tribes---living crowdedly”, and the other is “mouse tribes---living underground”. In fact, this embarrassing situation is so serious that most of us can not fail to concern about it.
As far as we know, some college graduates are quite ambitious. They are eager to compete in big cities like Shanghai and Beijing etc., where more chances are available but talents are abundant. Thus refusing to go back hometown let the graduates suffer a lot in big cities. In brief, humble payment gives rise to their poor living conditions and they can not bear the high cost of life in big cities.
In my opinion, college graduates should be more qualified and better themselves to get higher salaries and adjust their goals according to the reality. 【点评】
首句交待背景,用无生命的名词词组(inanimate noun phrase)作主语并使用被动语态,文章更加客观中立。
第二句话使用单词embarrassing,深入地挖掘了当今大学生生存状况艰难。第三句话为承上启下句,fail to do sth.表示没能、不能做某事。文章第二部分阐释了作者的个人看法。认为此社会现象的一个原因是大城市的高消费与大学生刚刚毕业收入相对较低之间产生的矛盾。第二个原因来自大学生对自身期许过高与大城市人才济济之间的矛盾。使用单词ambitious,表示雄心勃勃。在形容人才济济时,
使用abundant,表示充足的。此外,文章还指出第一个原因是直接原因,第二个原因是间接导致了大学生生存困境。
最后一段给出了解决方法,better oneself指使某人自身更加优秀,better此处作动词讲。 预测作文(四)
The Popularity of Micro-blogging
1.近年来“微博”越来越流行,许多人利用“微博”来表达心声、交流想法。
2.微博流行的原因。 3.微博可能引起的弊端。 【范文】
At present, Micro-blogging is no longer a strange word. More precisely, it has become part of our life.
As for as we know, many factors contribute to the widespread of Micro-blogging. First, it is very convenient for people to express their instant feelings at any time. Second, it provides a chance for people to release their inner stress. By revealing their heartfelt emotions on the Micro-blogging, their friends may also know about their conditions and can offer in-time comfort.
However, Micro-blogging can also be potentially dangerous as it may give away people’s privacy and other significant information.
All in all, Micro-blogging provides us comfort and also inevitably
some concerns. We should be careful while using it. 【点评】
第一段直接切入主题。首句在说明微博越来越流行时没有用肯定句micro-blogging is more and more popular, 而是用否定句的方式“负负得正”。
从第二段开始阐释流行的原因。Contribute to是固定词组,表示为„„作出贡献,其对应的名词是contribution。第一个原因是微博方便人们在任何时候表达他们当时的感觉。这里通过“at any time”和“instant feeling”突出了微博和传统博客的区别。第二个原因是微博可以减压。此处release表示释放,除了跟release pressure, release stress, 还可以跟release news。
第三段描述了微博的弊端,give away表示出卖,同义词有betray。最后一段是作者的对微博的态度,在充分肯定微博积极意义的同时提醒人们要谨慎使用微博。
预测作文(五)
Reflection on Natural Disasters
1. 最近国内外灾害不断发生,这些灾害引起了我们对于自然所做的
行为的再一次思考。 2. 你是如何看待自然灾害的?
3. 我们应该采取哪些措施来尽可能避免这些灾害和减少损失呢? 【范文】
Recently, natural disasters happen quite frequently, those devastating ones leave us to think(让某人做某事) about our behaviors towards nature again.
First of all,we need to set up a sound(成熟的) pre-warning(预警) mechanism, which enables us to detect potential risks at an early stage. Accordingly,emergency measures can be taken,and losses can be minimized.
Second,governments have to be equipped with an excellent Disaster Assistance Response Team(灾难救援反应小组)to rescue those disaster-stricken areas(灾区). The primary goal is to provide emergency services(应急服务), such as drinking water and medical treatment, until long-term aid arrives.
Third, citizens are supposed to realize that the main cause of disasters is largely due to climate crisis; therefore, they should use environmental appliances, plant more trees and economize our consumption.
From what has been discussed above, I maintain that minimizing the cost of disasters can be achieved by our persisting in protecting environment.
【点评】
第一段,提出问题并引起读者的注意。在形容自然灾害时,用
disaster。Devastating表示极具破坏性的,同义词为destroying。Leave sb. to do sth. 意味着使某人做某事。第二段写应有一套防灾减灾的应急措施。
第三段写政府应该具体做些什么来防灾减灾。Disaster-stricken为形容词,意思为饱受摧残的。
说了政府就要说个人。第四段写市民本身该怎样做以减少对自然的伤害,以求减少自然灾害发生。
最后一段maintain用来表示某人的观点,同义词还有observe, declare, insist。
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